作文是以記敘、描寫為主要表達(dá)方式，以記人、敘事、寫景、狀物為主要內(nèi)容的一種文體。

　　在作文寫作中，一件事情的發(fā)生，離不開時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事情的起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果這六方面，即常說的“六要素”，只有交待清楚這幾方面，才能使讀者對(duì)所敘述的事，有個(gè)清楚、全面的了解。

　　今天小編要與大家分享的是：小學(xué)生滿分作文：門縫中的最后一眼，具體內(nèi)容如下，僅供閱讀參考。

　　門縫中的最后一眼

　　我每天晚上都會(huì)去奶奶家吃飯，吃晚飯后我就回自己家。每次要回家了，奶奶總是讓我們過會(huì)兒再走，眼里也流露出不舍之情。

　　可我最近有一個(gè)重大發(fā)現(xiàn)：每次我下樓梯事都聽不見關(guān)門聲。許多猜測(cè)一下子涌進(jìn)了我的腦海：難道奶奶本來就不關(guān)門?還是有急事忘了關(guān)門?這些問題困擾著我，是我一定要弄他個(gè)水落石出。

　　今天我到了樓梯拐角處便停了下來，偷偷地觀察著奶奶的動(dòng)態(tài)。之間奶奶仍然站在門口，似乎在目送著我們回家，嘴角還掛著微微的笑意，過了許久她才把門關(guān)上。

　　這時(shí)，我心里有一種說不出的滋味。以前，我跟她斗嘴，爸爸嫌她話太多，可她卻仍然愛著我們。我相信，如果我這時(shí)摔了一跤，她一定是第一個(gè)沖過來把我扶起來的人。她的笑是多么慈祥，眼里閃爍著不舍的目光……

　　有時(shí)，親人的愛就在那一瞬間燃燒，可能他就在你身邊，只是你從未發(fā)現(xiàn)……

　　英文翻譯

　　One last look in the crack of the door

　　Every night I go to grandma's house for dinner, after dinner, I returned to his own home. Every time to go home, my grandma always let us go back later, eyes also reveal don't give up.

　　But I have recently an important discovery: every time I hear door shutting down the stairs things. Much speculation suddenly flooded into my mind: don't grandma was close? In a hurry and forgot to close the door? These problems bothering me, I must get him out.

　　Today I went to the stairs stopped around the corner, quietly watching grandma's dynamic. Between grandma still stood in the doorway, seemed to be watching us home, corners of the mouth hanging faint smile, she didn't close the door after a long time.

　　At this time, my in the mind have a kind of unspeakable taste. Previously, I bicker with her, dad too much her words, but she still loves us. I believe, if I had a fall at this moment, she must be the first person to blunt come over to help me get up. Her smile is how kind, without moving the eyes flashing eyes...

　　Sometimes, love family, in that instant combustion, maybe he is on your side, just you never find...