北京高考英語試卷滿分150分,作文共2篇,大作文為看圖作文20分,小作文15分,共占試卷總分的六分之一,雖然表面看來分?jǐn)?shù)不是很多,但是相對于其他題型是比較容易得分的,同時(shí)在得分上面也有著固定的梯度分配和規(guī)律,因此英語作文的寫作技巧和方法十分重要,以下是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編為大家精心準(zhǔn)備的：高考英語滿分作文及點(diǎn)評4篇。歡迎參考閱讀!

　　高考英語滿分作文及點(diǎn)評一

　　【試題回放】情景作文

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

　　注意：詞數(shù)不少于60

　　提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。

　　高考英語滿分作文及點(diǎn)評二

　　【試題回放】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇題為“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過程。

　　注意： 詞數(shù)不少于60.

　　提示詞： 游樂園amusement park 垃圾箱bin

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本情景作文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。本文覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。其中，寫作主題突出，詳略得當(dāng)，應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，而且有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文機(jī)構(gòu)緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫細(xì)致，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用了很多富有表現(xiàn)力的詞和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，將活動(dòng)的情形很形象地描述了出來。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1 set off 出發(fā)2. litter n.廢棄物3.respectively adv.分別地

　　好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

　　在爬山時(shí)，我們享受著溫暖的陽光和美麗的風(fēng)景。

　　1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

　　然而，當(dāng)我們登上山頂，被眼前的一幕驚呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮這樣的廢棄物到處都是。

　　評析：細(xì)節(jié)描寫，生動(dòng)形象。“shock”一詞也用得生動(dòng)傳神。

　　高考英語滿分作文及點(diǎn)評三

　　【試題回放】鼠標(biāo)是計(jì)算機(jī)時(shí)代最佳的人機(jī)交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計(jì)算機(jī)操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標(biāo)的習(xí)慣也會(huì)帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標(biāo)為切入點(diǎn)，根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　鼠標(biāo)的必要性對多數(shù)人來說，操作計(jì)算機(jī)，上網(wǎng)沖浪……

　　鼠標(biāo)的便捷性點(diǎn)擊、移動(dòng)、插入、拷貝、刪除……編輯文本，搜索信息……

　　收發(fā)郵件，選購商品……

　　點(diǎn)播音樂，下載電影……

　　如果過分依賴鼠標(biāo)…… (請考生結(jié)合自身感受，列舉兩到三點(diǎn))

　　注意：

　　1.對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

　　3.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

　　The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

　　For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

　　A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達(dá)多樣，用詞恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確。不失為一篇滿分作文

　　高考英語滿分作文及點(diǎn)評四

　　【試題回放】假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.外出購物

　　2.替房東還書

　　3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消

　　2)此事已告知Susan

　　3) 盡快回電

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評]

　　本文屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。