在英語(yǔ)高考試卷中,書面表達(dá)題往往占有很大的分值比重，以下是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編為大家精心準(zhǔn)備的：高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文參考范文4篇。歡迎參考閱讀!

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文參考一

　　【試題回放】

　　一家賓館新開(kāi)業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

　　2.房間及價(jià)格：?jiǎn)稳碎g(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;

　　3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);

　　4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開(kāi)放;

　　5.歡迎預(yù)定。

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開(kāi)頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋?lái)說(shuō)，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞　1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會(huì)給你帶來(lái)便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來(lái)便利。

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文參考二

　　【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛(ài)大熊貓(panda),一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：

　　1、 自我介紹; 2、祝賀蘇琳生日; 3、感謝工作人員; 4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

　　注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

　　例文：

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　Greetings from China!

　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

　　1.自我介紹;2.信息來(lái)源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。

　　這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語(yǔ)均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語(yǔ)言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對(duì)美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂(lè)的2.express v.表達(dá) 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育

　　好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　我祝福它生日快樂(lè)并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過(guò)著幸福和健康的生活。

　　評(píng)析：定語(yǔ)從句的使用。

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文參考三

　　【試題回放】

　　據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國(guó)女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

　　假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

　　自我介紹

　　得知的情況

　　表示鼓勵(lì)

　　打算為她做什么

　　祝她早日康復(fù)

　　注意：

　　1. 信的格式已為你寫好

　　2. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。

　　3. 詞數(shù)100左右。

　　4. 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

　　Dear Amy,

　　I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見(jiàn)的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對(duì)定語(yǔ)從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

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　　好詞1.realize v.意識(shí)到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈(zèng)

　　好句1、I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

　　我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來(lái)了巨大的痛苦。

　　好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

　　2、So, stand up and fight against the disease!

　　因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭(zhēng)吧!

　　好處：擲地有聲，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。

　　高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文參考四

　　【試題回放】假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購(gòu)買了一部某外國(guó)公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問(wèn)題，要求該公司更換。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

　　要點(diǎn)：1. 問(wèn)題：手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信;該產(chǎn)品已售完，無(wú)法更換;型號(hào)新，無(wú)配件，無(wú)法維修。2. 要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)為100左右;

　　2. 參考詞匯：配件—— spare part;

　　3. 電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù));

　　4.已給出的電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，如頭兩句說(shuō)明了購(gòu)買手機(jī)后發(fā)現(xiàn)故障的情況，中間部分說(shuō)明了無(wú)法維修而必須讓公司更換手機(jī)的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)清楚，較好的完成了任務(wù)。全文以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為基調(diào)，結(jié)合主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)與被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整嚴(yán)密。固定短語(yǔ)，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語(yǔ)言顯得地道而精煉。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的 3. consideration n.體諒

　　好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

　　令我失望的是，他說(shuō)因?yàn)樵谥袊?guó)是新款手機(jī)，所以沒(méi)有配件來(lái)修理。

　　評(píng)析：復(fù)雜句的組織; to my disappointment, 常用短語(yǔ)。