高考英語滿分作文題目及范文4篇
高考英語滿分作文題目及范文一
【試題回放】
假如你是李華,美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信,假如你是李華,美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信,主要內(nèi)容如下:
1、表示贊成。
2、提出你喜歡的欄目。
3、簡要說明理由。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右。
2. 新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
4. 參考欄目:欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn),導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章,寫的的確是好,很地道的美式英語,一些詞語的大膽使用,讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷,否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語,可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。
比如說:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用,list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect! 況且文章中沒有一個錯誤,不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度,不可謂不讓人佩服。
高考英語滿分作文題目及范文二
【試題回放】實現(xiàn)有效的溝通,建立良好的人際關(guān)系,不僅要善于言表,更要學(xué)會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。
為何傾聽表示尊重,增進理解,建立良好的人際關(guān)系
誰來傾聽家長傾聽孩子理解孩子,消除代溝,……
老師傾聽學(xué)生了解學(xué)生,滿足需求,……
同學(xué)相互傾聽增進友誼,互幫互學(xué),……
怎樣傾聽(請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容,列舉兩至三點。)
注意:
1、 對所給要點,逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。
2、 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。
3、 演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名師點評】
這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿,文中大量運用排比句型,不但準(zhǔn)確流暢地表達出題目中所提供的信息,而且體現(xiàn)出作者熟練運用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合句式,將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應(yīng)如何傾聽,則更進一步地增強了這篇演說稿的說服力。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1.promote v .促進 2. interpersonal adj.人際的
3. generation gap. 代溝 4. open-minded adj. 虛心的
好句1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
同學(xué)之間應(yīng)該互相傾聽,這樣他們可以互相學(xué)習(xí)和幫助,也會形成友誼。
評析:復(fù)雜句的組合,被動句的使用。
2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.
我想強調(diào)的是我們每個人都應(yīng)該更多的傾聽他人。
評析:復(fù)合句的使用。
高考英語滿分作文題目及范文三
【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點,全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進行,江蘇省1,100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項活動。
教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生:
每天鍛煉一小時
健康工作五十年
幸福生活一輩子
請你根據(jù)以上提示,用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿,向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況,并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉,談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>
注意:
1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息,要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2、詞數(shù):120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。
3、參考詞匯:陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.
The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.
In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
【名師點評】
本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰,同時句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段,前兩段敘述,后一段發(fā)表觀點,典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上,作者用法多樣,使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣,十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點之一。
積累卡片
好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn)3. advocate v.提倡
好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.
教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動,能夠健康地活50年。
評析:advocate,其后接虛擬語氣,可以省略情態(tài)動詞。
2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.
如果我們不進行運動,我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。
評析:虛擬語氣。
高考英語滿分作文題目及范文四
作文題目
假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文,來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,并告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1、詞數(shù):100左右;2、參考詞匯:房租—Tent(n.).
作品一:
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用,還使用了以‘which,’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富于變化,不愧為考場佳作。
作品二:
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確,內(nèi)容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確,特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮,既充實了內(nèi)容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的亮點。
